I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Friday, 26 June 2020
#1 Recount
The scody yellow liquid gets warmer by the second by the sickening stifling sun. Playing outside the office made us the centre of attention. I feel the eagle eyes watching my every step. My crazy loud teacher starts the game of fill the container. I'm in no hurry so I waddle my way down to the bucket full of yellow water. By the time I've got my one cup Ethans already coming back for more. I bite the side of the plastic cup full of my poisonous antidote ready to drop it off into my jet black container. Why? I ask myself, Why do we have to do this? It’s not even close to fun. But i guess it's better than being inside. I zone back in and the race is almost done. I drop off my last load into my container. Oh well, maybe next time.
Get creative task with Mikaera
Friday, 19 June 2020
appearance writing
Sitting, examining the mustard coloured capacious classes makes the ancient tree look more rustic. The gloomy grey clouds fit the cold wet benches vibe. I hear tones of beautiful birds singing their hearts out in the smoky air. The cold dark wind attacks my legs to make the last 5 minutes bitter. I hear a rumbling engine coming towards me. It makes the air smell of diesel.
Thursday, 11 June 2020
life is cruel
The hungry, homeless human grovels on the dirty ground begging for cash. “The world is cruel” he repeats to himself the world is cruel.
The mysterious male has rugged ripped cargo shorts with a had-it brown top with countless holes. His isolated shoe less feet keep him colder than ever. His big bulging eyes make him look more depressed. The only features on this individual that keeps him warm is his huge hairy beard and his big bushy Afro.
“Get a life loser” or “mum, why is that man sleeping on the ground?” Those are most common for this long gone wreck. He gets abused, kicked and even spat on. “Life is cruel” he says life is cruel
Friday, 5 June 2020
Mcdonalds letter
The Golden Archers, a place where everyone is satisfied…… until they’re not.
Ever gone into the playground and it reeks of feet, and that's all you can smell and think about? I would think that's a YES!
Or when you wait like FOREVER just to be let down with the wrong order, the burger looks better on the ad but not in real life, forgot to take out the ice or the classic “the ice cream machine is broken”?
what I especially don't like is the gross greasy floors, while you are walking to the filthy toilets. At that point i just want to go through the drive thru but then the line is HUGE!
So Mcdonalds. Just clean up more and read over my order another time just to be safe.
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