I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
In Manaiakalani with Whaea Vicki we worked on how ads can persuade people into doing or buying something. It was fun and I think I did well. Did mine persuade you? If it didn't, what else would I need to put into it?
I really like how you added the logo of who created the bike. this helps the reader have so much more context to the advert. Well done on creating a great ad.
I really like how you added the logo of who created the bike. this helps the reader have so much more context to the advert. Well done on creating a great ad.
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